I don't know what you were trying to show us, other than a lack of story and like no work put into it. Next time you do an animation make sure to have somewhat of a story. If you have a story then you can draw the characters, background, etc and you won't have people hating on your work like we did with this one.
I'd say your animating skills are "okay", your artwork needs some more work, and you need a lot more structure in your movies.
Hope this helped.
-Talvish
thanks but like i said.. its nothign speical as in I wasn't focusing on making it totally awesome, I just wnate to use a little idea to lpay around with.. but thanks anyways
It's nice to see you trying to go old school, but you really didn't put any effort into it, man. There's a lot of things that I could completely rip on, but I'll try not to the best I can! I'd say if you're not really going to animate much at least work on your art skills, and show more of what is going on. I mean, how did you think this was a good idea, to put a still image with "vote 5" in it and have this really, really annoying music playing in the background? At least try next time...
Hoped this helped!
-Talvish
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There's not a lot of things I could completely rip on.
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