I don't know what you were trying to show us, other than a lack of story and like no work put into it. Next time you do an animation make sure to have somewhat of a story. If you have a story then you can draw the characters, background, etc and you won't have people hating on your work like we did with this one.
I'd say your animating skills are "okay", your artwork needs some more work, and you need a lot more structure in your movies.
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thanks but like i said.. its nothign speical as in I wasn't focusing on making it totally awesome, I just wnate to use a little idea to lpay around with.. but thanks anyways
Lmao, the art was fairly good and the music wasn't bad at all. I'd say all you need to work on is maybe a little voice acting and the water animation was really hard to watch. That and when they were riding through the water, just because it was jerky and moving really fast.
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It's nice to see you trying to go old school, but you really didn't put any effort into it, man. There's a lot of things that I could completely rip on, but I'll try not to the best I can! I'd say if you're not really going to animate much at least work on your art skills, and show more of what is going on. I mean, how did you think this was a good idea, to put a still image with "vote 5" in it and have this really, really annoying music playing in the background? At least try next time...
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There's not a lot of things I could completely rip on.
Overall I'd like to say that the artwork was well done, and that the animation was decent as well. Something you should work on would be the blood (the color and animation of it). Also, you really didn't capture the story very well, you just showed some people dying when there's a lot more to the Anime series than that. Try to put in a little more story, I wouldn't even mind if you still kept no voice acting in it. As long as you can capture the story by showing the characters' emotions, some key points to the series, and probably show off the vectors a little more!
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